Stoking my own pipe.

Started by meekon5, January 22, 2012, 08:43:49 AM

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meekon5

As the title suggests this is a bit of me stoking my own pipe.

I've just started trying to write a bit more.

I'm also working my way through my back log of DVD's that I have as yet not watched.

So combining the two I have started reviewing the films I'm catching up on, on my blog.

I would appreciate constructive criticism on the following:

http://meekon5.blogspot.com/2012/01/social-network-meekon5-review.html

http://meekon5.blogspot.com/2012/01/source-code-meekon5-review.html

I don't claim it's any form a genius, but if any of you have the time.

At the moment there are only two of them but I have eleven more to catch up with (seen but not written up yet) and am watching about two to four films a week at the moment. So more to come on a regular basis.
"I have noticed even people who claim everything is predestined, and  that we can do nothing to change it, look before they cross the road."
Stephen Hawking

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WabiSabi

You are a brave man!  :o   

I haven't jumped there (to your blog) yet ... but I will and I'll be back ... "brace yer self matey"  ;) ;D ;D ;D
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WabiSabi

Okay ... I've been there (to your blog) ... so now I can speak with authority ;)

First of all I have to preempt my comments about your blogging with a comment about your bio ... it's bloody brilliant! Slathering self-deprecation and arrogant condescendence all at once ... I truly loved it! (I even sent it along to a friend who also got a kick out of it too.)

So now to the reviews ... very cool that your doing them. What I like best is that you are there in them as a person, not just talking from some ivory tower, but from in your own being and experience ... cool man, cool.

Not too much to go on about the films themselves (I've seen them both FWIW so maybe that has something to do with it.)

I like your ability to pull me in to the Source Code "conversation" though with a reference to "Inception" ... and again, maybe that has more to do with my agreement about what all the fuss was about that movie. I think it was more than a bit insipid myself (Inception) ... and agree with your views on "Source Code" ... so take my comments with a grain of salt, and have a margherita whilst you're at it.

Okay, bottom line (from my POV) ... I liked the chatty tone, the personality coming through, and I'd like more "something" ... it's okay to drag me in further, even if it takes me another two minutes of reading to get there. Overall, you can write man ... so write!
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meekon5

#3
Thanks for that Wabi. (amended from "Thanks for the Wabi" not that it didn't make about as much sense as i usually make)

I put another one up last night:

http://meekon5.blogspot.com/2012/01/rubber-meekon5-review.html
"I have noticed even people who claim everything is predestined, and  that we can do nothing to change it, look before they cross the road."
Stephen Hawking

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DigitalBuddha

Good prose there, M5. An un-compromised first draft.

cckeiser

I Love they way you write dude. I am quite envious! 8)
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Caesar dude

I read your poetry Meekon. I read "the longest weekend" and I cried and I remembered and I can't go back there.

Peace.
Love is like a butterfly it goes where it pleases and it pleases where it goes. :)

hannahdude

i too, wonder what the dogs could possibly be thinking as they watch us pick up their leavings with our little plastic bags. nice poetic musings, dude.

meekon5

It's a long time since I wrote any poetry.

Mainly because of the event in "the longest weekend". Thanks for your comments on that one Caesar. I think more and more people are experiencing some form of unraveling mentally in their lives.

I hit a complete blank.

One of the reasons I'm bloggng the film reviews is to get back into the swing of actually writing something on a regular basis that isn't the usual techno babble that I do at work (don't get me wrong I still love my work).

Thank you all for the comments I plan to continue to do little bits there on a regular basis. I'm going to blog the films I manage to watch in the week, but think I may look back across my collection for some of my favourites (shite and not).
"I have noticed even people who claim everything is predestined, and  that we can do nothing to change it, look before they cross the road."
Stephen Hawking

Where are you Dude? Place your pin @ http://tinyurl.com/dudemap

WabiSabi

Hey folks ... thanks for pointing me to that poem ...

Feecoo ... that was a bit radical, in the best possible way.

I have never taken the pills, nor heard those voices ... but I have experienced the blackness and I too have returned.

Now I write a little (or a lot) every day ... and read some too.

Thanks
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milnie

i am always impressed by people who have enough to say that they can write a blog so good going M5. I have thought about setting up a film review blog before but after looking over my film collection gave up. I mean, how can you summarise a film like luc besson's the big blue: "he might be a dolphin"?
anyway, look forward to more from your good self.
quod tendo non ut pallens adeo in terminus!

meekon5

Quote from: milnie on January 24, 2012, 09:01:34 AM
i am always impressed by people who have enough to say that they can write a blog so good going M5. I have thought about setting up a film review blog before but after looking over my film collection gave up. I mean, how can you summarise a film like luc besson's the big blue: "he might be a dolphin"?
anyway, look forward to more from your good self.

Now I thought the dolphins were mermaids in the big blue.

All you do is write what you felt about it. Anyone can agree or disagree.

and i always have more than enough opinions to be able to share a few of them.
"I have noticed even people who claim everything is predestined, and  that we can do nothing to change it, look before they cross the road."
Stephen Hawking

Where are you Dude? Place your pin @ http://tinyurl.com/dudemap

milnie

or spirits of the dead (like his father who drowned)
quod tendo non ut pallens adeo in terminus!

WabiSabi

 i always have more than enough opinions to be able to share a few of them


Hahahaha ... touche!
Livin's Hard .. Dyin's Easy ... Use The Time Between Them Well

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Caesar dude

Meekon...always thought we shared some common ground. The poem touched me because it was EXACTLY how I felt and acted...the drugs didn't work for me at all....the love of good people and some sort of inner strength pulled me through those dark days..

You know as well as I do that those days may come again. I know that I wouldn't have got through this year if I hadn't experienced that despair. I would have crumbled at just the moment when someone who needed me the most was in need.

Dark days my friend those curtains drawn, that withdrawal into my cave, that reliance on my spirituality. The pure despair. The hopelessness. You know where that leads. Then one day an awakening. Some sort of brightness. Maybe a strangers words. I can't pin it down but something made me want to push on.

So I did and I got a job (yes sir dressed like that!) and I became....me again...and I started to respect me once more.

And here I am a whole lot more of a rounded person...still with problems that the world knows fuck all about! But at least I'm me and I'm still here.

Writing! Hah! I used to write so so much....then that darkness came...and it stopped!

Maybe one day my muse will return.

Bright blessings Simon. With love and openness and feeling my friend.

Peace
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